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《A busy weekend_800字》
I had a busy weekend . I did lots of things .On Saturday morning , I watered the plants . Then , I sent some emails to my friends . In the afternoon , I didmy homework . Then , I played the piano . In the evening , I cleaned my room by myself . Then , My family and I visited family and friends . On Sunday morning , I fished with my best friend , Anna . Then ,I painted the picture . In the afternoon , I read an interesting book . Then , My mother and I went to the beach .The sea was beautiful . In the evening , I ate a big dinner . The food was spicy and delicious . Then , I saw a film at the cinema . The film was nice .I was busy but I was happy .
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Ihad a busy weekend.Idid lots of things. On Saturday morning,I watered the plants. Then, I sent some emails tomy friends. Inthe afternoon, I did my homework. Then, I played the piano. In the evening, I cleaned my room by myself. Then, My family and I visited family and friends.
On Sunday morning, I fishedwithmybest friend, Anna. Then, I painted the picture. In the afternoon , I read an interesting book. Then, My mother and I went to the beach. The sea was beautiful. In the evening, I ate abigdinner. Thefood was spicyanddelicious. Then, I saw afilmatthe cinema. The film wasnice . I was busy but Iwashappy .
六年级:李勤